I took a sneak peak at your profile. :D You have some nice songs that shows a litle bit of your music perspective. I enjoyed to listen some of them, specially one mostly in piano. About this one, in my opinion the song transmits a good mood, it's kind of dreamy and even inspirational. About the mel...
Wow, you did put really good effort.
nice I like that .. awesome
I would tell what I feel rather than what I think:
0:20 yeeeeaow thats it man. nice start
2:25 hmmm, was waiting for a suprise but It did not happen (anti-suprise )
https://soundcloud.com/hamza_k-1/music-session/s-AuwGp Nice one. The sound is well worked. (too bad it's too short) Which instruments did you use, the LMMS synths? Glad you like it. usually if I plan long track = never publish :mrgreen: >> seriosly I am sorry for it too !! 8-) I did not use much - ...
Agree with @D.Ipsum regarding development.
I would add to it balancing sounds, e.g. I think kick sound is high in "This Old Town". I like what you have done in "All My Love to You" and feel it is better than the latter, considering sound balance point.