Here's an updated version of this song: https://soundcloud.com/lego-stax/quiet-evening-1

I did my best to add more sounds and make the bass easier to hear by adding a higher octave. Please tell me what you think. :)
Thanks for the pointers! I'll post here again this weekend after I've developed it more.
Please post your thoughts and ideas on how I could improve. Thanks!

https://soundcloud.com/lego-stax/quiet-evening