Soundin' good dude. Okay, I noticed something: The synth melody that plays in the background, that can be heard from 23 secs to 48 secs , seems to be out of key, with the rest of the tune. You might have to find the right key, so it'll blend in well, with the other sounds. :) Thanks! I'll see what ...
Here's a new version I made with a different synth and a few other changes.
https://soundcloud.com/jole-challinor/s ... new-melody
Soundcloud has been butchering the quality, so I'll probably move to newgrounds.