The tune and content of the track is perfect, but i think as you have pointed out, it needs something over it vocally as it kind of is very same all the way through. Thats not a criticism, i just think it will work well when you something that breaks up the repetitiveness of the tune. (Few more bars...
I like the direction it takes at 03:17, very energetic. The remainder of the track is not really my cup of tea. That being said, it does not take away from the obvious amount of effort gone into it, Just before the break i mentioned above, it had the hallmarks of tune from Sega Mega drive game or th...
My latest release, appreciate any feedback, https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=rUqqydJ26AI loving this, a nice little acidic number to go with my tea in the morning! I can't think of anything you could do better with this really - I absolutely love how you've put the talking over that acid bassline & va...
Great flow to the track and sounds also,

One thing i would change is the Kick is quite weak, but thats just my preference for tracks, i like to hear the Kick punch through.
My latest release
Had a listen to it there, At one time I may have digged this style of music, but not really anymore, buts thats neither here nor there, (Hope that last comment isn't to confusing for anyone with basic English, it means it does not matter) The track works really really well for the type of track it i...
Hi, I meant to comment on this a few days ago and it slipped by me, There is a lot going on in it, it feels like many different styles across many decades, Initially, for me it felt like it would fit perfectly as a score to Stranger Things, or that episode of Black Mirror San junipero, then it had s...
On first listen, it is arranged very well indeed, i would need to listen to it again a couple times to give any further real breakdown from my perspective on that. For a video game, it definitely fits as the opening score or end score when you have finished, however, being a big video game fan havin...
Hey! I just did a new instrumental. If someone wants to listen: https://soundcloud.com/mikkoorbit/sat-in-front-of-the-bay-lights Thoughts? Thanks :D Now this sounds cool. :D Tip: Okay. I think the entire track, sounds a bit too compressed. Too much compression, or turning too much of a dial on a co...
Your title of thread poses a question, my answer to that question.........it depends on what you are trying to achieve. My take on things like this is you need to work on something until you are satisfied you have achieved what you were setting out to achieve. I cannot really tell whether it is good...