Hard for me to comment on whether it is good or bad, with hip hop and rap my experience would be limited.

I would have been a listener many moons ago to Public Enemy & Cypress Hill,

Your track, It sounds like it flows very well and structured well, thats all i can offer.
Loved the energy in this one way back,

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WydWh_hXW-A
Long before knew what 'LFO' was, i loved this track,

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RpZVPSCv79U
One of my favorite early tracks,

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BK2U5ziV_Z8
Poll to see where forum users are mostly from,
One of the best collaborations ever, punks lead man & electronic music meet,

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hZj9bi7YNmI
Serious BPM, one for the early morning.........

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d_qS-4zemCU
One of the best songs ever made,

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wfWMv8Y1V5E