You seem to be impressively productive! To a certain degree I'm out of my comfort zone with this kind of stuff (beats, electronic music), but I like it nonetheless. The build-up at the beginning is pretty exciting. Maybe you could add even more elements progressively to increase that. It's like (1)...
I love this song mate! It makes me think of how the songs were made maybe until 2010 or around those years, even earlier.
Thank you for a beautiful experience! Cheers!