The cicada sound actually slightly out of sync for whatever reason on purpose. This is actually an unfinished version, here's the most recent one https://lmms.io/forum/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=28495

Finished it with a title and proper ending. Any opinions and criticisms? https://soundcloud.com/user-400928735/s ... stay-alive

what instruments and stuff did you use?

https://soundcloud.com/user-400928735/sumfink I don't know what to think about this one. Any thoughts?

5/4 is a relatively normal time. this beat is a special type of difficult. Any reason in particular? well what key is it in? listening to it, i find it pretty difficult to place it on any one thing, but the drums and piano feels very erratic. maybe it makes more sense looking at the midi notes No i...

samthekid108 wrote: ↑

Mon Jun 25, 2018 9:18 pm

the black ryvius wrote: ↑

Mon Jun 25, 2018 7:31 pm

samthekid108 wrote: ↑

Mon Jun 25, 2018 4:38 pm

this sounds pretty difficult to rap along to

Um, is it because it's in 5/4? I don't reallh think that'd be a problem

5/4 is a relatively normal time. this beat is a special type of difficult.

Any reason in particular?

I did some subtle touch ups in the mean time. New and improved; https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Whz-o5m2pf4XlraiUKd1OeSulWeSCT_e/view?usp=sharing A guy is supposed to rap over it, so that's why there's repetition. Hey there ryvius! so these are the only thing I can tell: - I didn't really like the...

Any parts in particular that need improvement? Okay. I think if the kicker sound, was a bit fuller sounding, it would sound a bit cooler. I know, it's difficult to explain. :P i think i have the same critique. the kick is very clicky, and you should prolly soften it up and maybe put some lowpass on...

samthekid108 wrote: ↑

Mon Jun 25, 2018 4:38 pm

this sounds pretty difficult to rap along to

Um, is it because it's in 5/4? I don't reallh think that'd be a problem

May I have a link good sir