Well the problem was / is, I don't have a clue on how to improve, but I am gonna let this song rest for now. My self confidence is big enough to take criticisms, and I am very happy, I now know I can trust her judgment, so I wont beat myself up. Hard to put in words, but in life you need you're rati...
Something i like to share with you guys. As usual I asked my online friends, what they thought about my latest creation. ( I'm a boss ) One reply from a great looking woman, who also plays music, was for me remarkable enough to share with you guys. you got stuck in it and couldnt stop thats what it ...
What also can help, when you read something, also say the words.
I am happy with it. Changed the strings some more(octave up) added a phazer, and made a variation in the melody.
Done some final mixing.

Feedback as always very welcome.
https://soundcloud.com/user586365033/im-a-boss
Great progress on the strings. making the notes shorter was a great tip, but I was still not happy. The solution was to have have them, on the third count. ( like some other tracks in the song) which gives the song a reggae like sound. Main bassline is still very not reggae, but I am not sure I want...
@ Musikbear LOL, had to read that twice, but I get it. And rumor has it, the holy ganja is growing in my garden. :P @Slipstick, yep that's one thing he explains, he calls it the bass drops. And he turns off the snap function in FL, to make it sound more real (less computer generated) and he also cha...
I found this page, and its all I needed.

https://archiewahwah.wordpress.com/2013 ... he-basics/

He uses fruity loops, but that's not important. We can do this in lmms.
I found a page about reggae, and while reading it, I started to smile. Now, in reggae it’s important to know that the rhythm revolves around the third beat – the third will be the most emphasised. I already have this in lmms, but was thinking it was not right. I should trust my ears, because they sa...
Thank you. I have not forgotten the headphone suggested through these boards. It might happen. ( it would prob have already happen, if the tax office, had kept their promise ) I love what my sennheiser game headset does to mp3, but that also makes it not so great for mixing. A nice example is part o...
Thank you, nice share.