Thanks to everyone for your great feedback .
Those lyrics sound great Brandy .
The sample is Gimme money then the first bit repeats twice Gimme Gimme

Thanks for the feedback. The track didn't turn out how I wanted it really . Too many comprises. It started off sounding much harder and less smooth, which sounded much better. My new track is a 100 times better

Hi. Another new track with a more modern sound and a very tiny bit of Kraftwerk as well . Hopefully my best song yet. All feedback welcome
Listen to Auto Freeway by Dewke #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-330158/auto-freeway

Superb

Thanks

Hi. Another new song. Have gone between minor and major key . Hope it works. All feedback needed . Thanks
Listen to The Central Cavern by Dewke #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-330158/the-central-cavern

Thanks D.Ipsum . I tried to put a few more breaks in this one

Thanks Brandy and Mo . I do agree that the song is a mish mash of ideas. It started off much more experimental, but the song doesn't really go anywhere . Was worried about the ooh sample. Not sure if it's quite in tune or if it fits

Here's my new song. A bit experimental in places . I hope the drums sound ok. I'm also a bit unsure of one of the samples . Any feedback welcome
Listen to Blink Of An Eye by Dewke #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-330158/blink-of-an-eye