Help with transition

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I was trying to rebuild Gospel of Dismay for fun, and I hit a point where I made a transition that doesn't sound very good:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1lpo_kI ... sp=sharing at timestamp 1:19, Buildup to transition starts 1:15.
I'm looking for suggestions to improve this transition (but other suggestions to improve anything else in the song would be appreciated too). Thanks!
Note: it isn't complete yet. I know the end sounds empty.
Monospace wrote:
Sat May 15, 2021 3:11 am
I made a transition that doesn't sound very good:
at timestamp 1:19, Buildup to transition starts 1:15.
It sounds like you want to have an 'echo-effect' should it be over longer time? Eg produce several more echoes?
It will also be more 'catchy' if you add a pause after the last echo, and then go back to the rest. Then it 'stands out' more, and the listener will take notice
Musikbear, to be sure, I am trying to remix this song: https://youtu.be/b4-FLf4VMl0 (is the instrumental)
Meaning my timing has to stay true to the vocals of this song: https://youtu.be/2Jco30RGuHo
Both of your suggestions involve pushing the segments forward.
gilyerom wrote:
Thu May 27, 2021 12:22 pm
Just for me would be better to find a professional.
Can you clarify what you mean? If you're talking about asking a professional for help; unfortunately, that isn't very feasible yet. Any direct suggestions on how to improve the transition, however, would be appreciated.
Monospace wrote:
Fri May 28, 2021 5:36 am
gilyerom wrote:
Thu May 27, 2021 12:22 pm
Just for me would be better to find a professional.
Can you clarify what you mean? If you're talking about asking a professional for help; unfortunately, that isn't very feasible yet. Any direct suggestions on how to improve the transition, however, would be appreciated.
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Your transition..
Your limitations in the tempi restrict you from being creative, so its really difficult to suggest something.
I dont really know
You could see if any of these

could be used, but they are mostly typical trance effects, but perhaps you could get inspired?
Thanks, musikbear, I found it very useful! Will definitely use this technique.
PS. Most effective jumpscare LMMS has ever given.
Monospace wrote:
Sun May 30, 2021 1:33 pm
Thanks, musikbear, I found it very useful! Will definitely use this technique. 👍
PS. Most effective jumpscare LMMS has ever given.
What 'jumpscared' eg came out loud?
Your video.
BASS.
I was not expecting that, and had my volume higher than usual.
I suppose there's nothing that can be done about it.