Wooah!! THIS SONG IS DARK!
I really wasn't expecting a song like this on Lmms. But Wooah!
It's Eeriely scary yet enjoyable.
And strangely when I listened to it,
I see a fantasy world with a boat sailing across the sea. And a Giant Full moon is in the back ground, with lots of luminescent clouds slowly passing bye.
That's some serious composing you got there fapper dude.
But this song is Dark. Really Dark! Lol!
I don't really like dark sounding electronic music, but this is really good.
I tried to go for a darker sound, I'm really into dark electronic music so yeah.
You were going to go Darker than this? Wooah!!
Dude. Believe me when I say........................
"this is Dark enough." Lol!
If you go any Darker than that dude..............you'll scare all of the listeners. Including me. Lol!
But I will admit,....................strangely............I enjoyed listening to it.
Nice job well done fapper.
Tell me how I'm doing.
What should I change? How can I improve my production? What more/different would you liked to hear?
In my opinion, it's too Dark.
But the dark ambient melody suits this track perfectly.
Okay, now for the critiques and advice.
1) From
49 secs - 1:02 secs, the drums seem to be played, out of tune or out of sync with the main music.
It even sounds like if the drum notes are not going in time and rythmn, with the rest of the music.
2) From
2:22 - 2:24, the song from 2:22, should have slided easily into 2:24.
The change sounded too abrupt.
It sounded like if you
cut off one song and
gone into another different music track.
3) From 4:16 to 4:17, that was a nice ease of transition.
Very well good job there fapper dude.
That ease of transition was near excellent. It is what you should do, for
1 up above. 
4) Hmmm.............from what I've noticed throughout the song, the
bass drum playing in the background has too much
noise artifacts and clipping in it. Causing a
clashing trushing staticy sound, which competes with the entire melody of the track.
ADVICE: To get rid of that
clipping noise, add a limiter to it and turn the dial to adjust, and remove "most," of the clipping noise artifacts and unwanted vibrations.
You don't have to
"limit," it by much though.
Just enough to keep the bass drum sounding loud and booming, and sounding Crystal cleary. With out the annoying clipping staticy sound that competes with the rest of the music.
I must admit.
"That Drum you used in this music track, is Loud and Awesome!"
I like it.
All in all. Very interesting song you've got there dude. Very dark, but yet Amazing.
I hoped that helped,.....................Bye.
