First tracks - electro, new-wave, metal(?)

[orionprjct]

Hi, these are my two first tracks with lmms:
https://soundcloud.com/orion-project-mu ... cyberskies
https://soundcloud.com/orion-project-mu ... -interlude

What do you think about it? i've been a metal band guitarist, but i also like electro dance music, and old 80's new-wave...So i don't know which influence leads!

[Sti-Jay]

Through the cyberskies was really cool. Now that bass instrument is lame, it isn't dark enough. And in the beginning it sounds a lot like trance music, which I personally aren't so found of, but the rest of the song was quite awesome.

Love Interlude was even more awesome! The way you use Erazzor in this song is exactly how it should be used, IMO And there is many different interesting parts in the song, so it doesn't get boring even if the song is long. If you continue to make music with LMMS you can become very good! You already know how to arrange songs, I think you should work a tiny bit more on mixing.

[orionprjct]

Thanx for these advices!
I used Erazzor on through the cyberskies, to make the lead melody sounding like a "computer datas reading", but i changed in love interlude (i used SEguitar), because Erazzor sounds a little poor with high notes.
I still have a lot of things to learn with lmms, thank you for your imboldening opinion!