First SoundCloud Song

[calvertja3]

Below in a link is my first song I made off of LMMS. Any constructive critisism or comments are welcomed.

Here's the link:

https://soundcloud.com/ryan-calvert-8/e ... %3Apublish

You can also listen to it here :

https://soundcloud.com/ryan-calvert-8/evoluscence

Thank you!

[badosu]

Good one! I really like the application of the sweep, very good!

[calvertja3]

Badosu, Thank you for the positive feedback, after listening to it, would you add any different instraments or effects, or take anything out. Thanks again