Preaching to the Deserted

[Dewke]

A new trap beat song. A lot going on in this track. Feedback welcome
Listen to Preaching to the Deserted by Dewke #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-330158/prea ... e-deserted

[brandystarbrite]

It sounds good and you're on to something cool here.
But for some strange reason, it seems to be missing a special something, that'll make it sound better.

Feel free to improve this track and re-post it, whenever you have time, so we could listen to it.

[D.Ipsum]

Nice one.

I find that the reverb is too pronounced in this track (I've listened with headphones, so ...).
Maybe via automation, it is possible to play with it.

For the snares, I think it would be nice to have clones of each snare, and to greatly decrease the reverb of the snares cloned. Then, you could sometimes replace a reverberated snare shot by a no/less reverberated snare shot.

Anyway, nice one.

[Dewke]

Thanks for the feedback. Will definitely add more. I agree with it missing something. Maybe some changes in the chords which are a bit monotone to add more of a tune.