Away - TvH (WIP)

[TvHead]

Hello! It's been quite awhile since I've posted something on here, but... here you go!

This song I recently started to make just a day ago, and it's about a third of the way done. So I was wondering if I could get some feedback for what is made so far, and then I can improve it as its build continues.

https://soundcloud.com/user-130037238/away-tvh-wip

[insonico]

Nice to see you posting again!

It sounds nice so far. I don't know what direction you want to take this track, but my initial suggestion would be for you to add a bass towards the end of this first section or the beginning of the next one. I think the track could do well with some low-end.
Anyway, looking forward to future developments!

[D.Ipsum]

Yep, so far, it works. It is now that the delicate part of development begins

[brandystarbrite]

Hello! It's been quite awhile since I've posted something on here, but... here you go!

This song I recently started to make just a day ago, and it's about a third of the way done. So I was wondering if I could get some feedback for what is made so far, and then I can improve it as its build continues.

https://soundcloud.com/user-130037238/away-tvh-wip

Good beat.
If it was a bit longer, I would probably be able, to give you some advice.
But for what you have so far, for a short wip, it sounds pretty decent.
I'm curious to see, what you're going to do with it.