Ominous pulse

[qantuum]

Dear friends,

Today I wanted to use one of the pictures I've made in a submarine as thumbnail for a song.
The song and the song title came after this, not sure whether I made good use of this picture but anyways.

F*ck my brains for being a weirdo, and enjoy the track
thanks

https://soundcloud.com/marvin-shmn/ominous-pulse-2

[brandystarbrite]

Okay. The synth sound that plays the melody, needs a tiny bit of reverb effect etc.

The single snare hit, that comes in once in a while, might need some reverb too.
And I think that snare, needs a tiny volume reduction.

I suggest using Lmms' calf reverb.
Because most of the time, that effect plugin, always seems to do the work well.
The other Lmms reverb plugins are okay too.

[qantuum]

Thanks sir,
I replace the link in the first post with the new version containing more reverb.

Indeed it adds something '80s to this lead instrument, and the snare comes even more biting.

[D.Ipsum]

"Tempo 156 just because"

With the metronomic hat, I was expecting for the arrival of other percussive elements.

[PPNDP]

Hey,
It sounds cool - a bit like some old school Japanese electronic. The melody and whole idea makes sense but def you need work with automation track: change levels of volume from one place to another, some effects setting (experiment with all those knobs you have there). I would also add some automation to the beat too. Also maybe some vocal samples?