Looking for some harsh feedback

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Hey people, would like to get some real feedback on my beat open to all comments positive and negative. Also looking for thoughts on my mix.
Thanks

https://youtu.be/Qclj2dzz8Dg
I listen with cheap headphones.

Nice beat, a little repetitive for my taste, maybe it would be better with lyrics, the flow of the rapper could mitigate or break this repetition.

There is something that bothers me with the bass, but what? I do not know.
bank wrote:
Thu Oct 26, 2017 6:19 am
Hey people, would like to get some real feedback on my beat open to all comments positive and negative. Also looking for thoughts on my mix.
Thanks

https://youtu.be/Qclj2dzz8Dg
I just listened to this on speakers.
The beat is good.
But I agree, adding vocals to it, would suit this track and make it sound even better.
D.Ipsum wrote:
Fri Oct 27, 2017 8:14 pm
I listen with cheap headphones.

Nice beat, a little repetitive for my taste, maybe it would be better with lyrics, the flow of the rapper could mitigate or break this repetition.

There is something that bothers me with the bass, but what? I do not know.
Definitely agree on the bass. I think it's because the key it's in doesn't match up with the key of the other melodies going on in the background. Would sound a bit better if they did, and if the bass was turned down a bit enough to intermingle with the drums and the stringy melodies and meld with them better rather than overpowering them (or better still, use a more "subtle" bass).

But that's just my opinion.
bank, what do you think about it?