New house wip, feedback pls

[|DIVIDE]

I'm trying to make this a really well-made track, I've put a lot of effort into it already and would love some feedback to make it even better!

https://clyp.it/lftx4rko

[Gps]

I think the main theme needs a bit more variation.

[D.Ipsum]

i agree with Gps.

The kick that appears at 02m16s lacks impact (like the relaxed skin of a drum).

I guess it's a dance-oriented track, so I find that the kick-driven parts are too short.

[insonico]

I feel like the intro sounds a couple of bars too repetitive. So, yeah, some variation would be nice.
Otherwise, nice work.

[Mo Stitchi]

Yop,


A bit more variations indeed, but nice tune. I like the end, no fade-out...