I mixed an old track again, have I improved?(Before & After)

[SkyEyeMCCIX]

Before: https://soundcloud.com/skyeye-mccix/flash-20
After: https://soundcloud.com/skyeye-mccix/flashpoint-new-mix

There it is, most notably I reduced the bass, softened the drums, added a phaser (which I have literally never used before) to most of the main synths, and to me it sounds a whole lot better.

However, I wanna hear other people's feeling on this, constructive feedback is welcomed!

[D.Ipsum]

I do not have a clear preference for either version.

One detail, in both versions, I would say that the snare lacks a bit of volume.

In the new version, sometimes we do not hear the kick, it seems hidden by another instrument.

Anyway, I like this track.