Need opinions and advice!

Share and discuss your LMMS music projects here, and see what people think!
So I've been working on this chiptune track;

https://clyp.it/tjqdf2ra

And I need general advice on it, aswell as ideas for the second drop (since I want to add something new there, I was thinking maybe glitchy/dubstepy growls but I can't work out how I'd make chiptune sounding ones or where I'd get decent ones if I looked for samples) Second drop starts at 2:43
Reply + Slight bump;
Edited it and changed/added some things. It still needs mixing however, so keep your volume low to avoid headaches...

https://clyp.it/tjqdf2ra
I listened to the second link.
So far it's sounding cool.
I listened to the second link.
So far it's sounding cool.
I listened to the edited version. Nice one.

Although I do not know much about your work (I remember your album and Petrichor), I feel that you have progressed well!
brandystarbrite wrote:
Sun Nov 12, 2017 2:26 am
I listened to the second link.
So far it's sounding cool.
D.Ipsum wrote: I listened to the edited version. Nice one.

Although I do not know much about your work (I remember your album and Petrichor), I feel that you have progressed well!
Thank you both!
D.Ipsum wrote: I feel that you have progressed well!
That's great to hear! Thank you! :)