Need Feedback on this song

[Noire]

Just some feedback on that and what need to change.


https://soundcloud.com/lostmelodyagain/build-1

[Aiminer357]

My opinion.

Needs a pad or bass to fill in the gaps. Your melody is not in key (Not a bad thing! Gives it a haunting feel.) so it may be hard to find the right chords.

The melody and key change were very interesting in this.

[D.Ipsum]

As an advice, I would say leave this track, and make another one

[brandystarbrite]

The first thing I found interesting, is that this track has a kinda twisty, crazy type haunted sound to it.
And the out of keynotes, really do give this track an interesting effect though.

After listening to your entire track, I found that it sounded kinda empty somehow.
Like it's missing alot of cool stuff, that'll make it sound better. eg. synths, pads, sounds etc.
So I agree, with the above posters comment and the suggestions he gave.

Take your time with this track, it has the potential, to be a good track.