Back after a few months! (Work in progress)

[TSHN]

I haven't posted in a while as, throughout summer, i've been trying to find my own sound...

Here's something i made during that time that i wanted to share!

https://soundcloud.com/tshn_xx/t-2017

Thanks for listening.

Feedback is welcomed although this hasn't been mixed.

[D.Ipsum]

Really nice one! I have a good feeling with this one, especially with the first part.

Is this your voice?

[brandystarbrite]

Soundin' good so far.

Tip: Try to make it sound, a bit more exciting.

[TSHN]

Really nice one! I have a good feeling with this one, especially with the first part.

Is this your voice?

Thanks.

No, actually It's vocals i choped another song (and reverbed a bit).

[TSHN]

Soundin' good so far.

Tip: Try to make it sound, a bit more exciting.

What would you suggest adding for excitement?

[brandystarbrite]

Soundin' good so far.

Tip: Try to make it sound, a bit more exciting.

What would you suggest adding for excitement?

Maybe a slightly stronger kick sound.
Strong, but not too strong.

Also, nice use of vocals.