My f i r s t House song (or whatever)

[vortexsupernova]

Nah, I just got some weird vibes when I made this. The original chord progression ruined so... weird melody.

The full description (including my statement why the melody is weird) and the link of the song is here:
https://vortexsupernova.deviantart.com/ ... -723173682

I got managed to post there because I don't have friends here
and i barely know this community
jk

it's short, actually. one minute.
iwantedsomeonetohelpmefinishbuti'mhopeless

thoughts?

[D.Ipsum]

Indeed, a little short. Otherwise, good sketch, sounds good.

ButIcannothelpyoutodevelopthecomposition,I'malreadydrownedinmyownprojects...

[brandystarbrite]

This wip tune sounds good.
A bit too short though, but still, I can tell you're on to something cool here.

I read your story on it, and I agree. More work can be done to it.
So far, good work.