Possible Demo! Feedback Please!

[|DIVIDE]

I've made a track that I think would be a good shot at being a demo for Laidback Luke/Mixmash Records, can you guys give me your best feedback on it? I need it to be as good as I can make it before I send it out

https://soundcloud.com/freedivide/demo/s-nYOGo

Thanks,
Divide

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