Hallucity

[AXLSANG]

Hi,
Can you listen to my Hallycity track and let me know what you thick about it ?
https://soundcloud.com/user-930436467/a ... -hallucity
Thank you by advance,
Axl Sang

[D.Ipsum]

https://soundcloud.com/user-930436467/a ... -hallucity

Nice intro.
The appearance of the beat is good, but I think there is too much silence behind this beat, it contrasts too much with the intro.

[brandystarbrite]

Hi,
Can you listen to my Hallycity track and let me know what you thick about it ?
https://soundcloud.com/user-930436467/a ... -hallucity
Thank you by advance,
Axl Sang

This is a super nice tune that you made here.
The lovely melodies, cool synth sounds and the overall pace of this tune, is very calming.

Also, welcome to the forums AXLSANG.

[AXLSANG]

Thank you D.Ipsum for that precious advice, i'm working on a new version to take it into account !
I'll post it as soon as possible.
Axl

[AXLSANG]

Thank you Brandy for your welcome and encouraging posts.
I posted a new track i made a few weeks before.

https://soundcloud.com/user-930436467/a ... h-the-line

I will post new ones soon

Axl Sang

Hi,
Can you listen to my Hallycity track and let me know what you thick about it ?
https://soundcloud.com/user-930436467/a ... -hallucity
Thank you by advance,
Axl Sang

This is a super nice tune that you made here.
The lovely melodies, cool synth sounds and the overall pace of this tune, is very calming.

Also, welcome to the forums AXLSANG.

[Gps]

I think both melodies are good, but youre tracks could use a bit more structure I think.

[brandystarbrite]

Thank you Brandy for your welcome and encouraging posts.
I posted a new track i made a few weeks before.

https://soundcloud.com/user-930436467/a ... h-the-line

I will post new ones soon

Axl Sang

Oh, no probs. Always glad to help, just like everyone else.

Okay, I just listened to your new track, play-with-the-line.

That electric synth sound and the melody, heard from 1:29 secs to 1:57 secs,
and later on, was a nice added touch to this track.
Alot of the synth instruments in this, sound really cool. And the melodies made with them
sound really melodious and have this cool, playful ring to them too. Especially, when
the electric synth sound I mentioned above, starts to play.

[D.Ipsum]

I posted a new track i made a few weeks before.

https://soundcloud.com/user-930436467/a ... h-the-line

I listened to it yesterday, I enjoyed it.

And today I confirm, it is well built.

However, it sounds amateurish. But I do not have any particular advice.