Feedback and Need Help on this projects

[Noire]

I have working on these two song for months now. ATM I keep feeling something is missing, any feedback and help will do



https://soundcloud.com/lostmelodyagain/ ... emix-again
https://soundcloud.com/lostmelodyagain/dreamerv2

[D.Ipsum]

https://soundcloud.com/lostmelodyagain/ ... emix-again
https://soundcloud.com/lostmelodyagain/dreamerv2

What could be missing in your opinion?

If you spent several months on these tracks, I would say to put them away, and to make others.
And re-listen to them once you have forgotten them for a new first impression.

[AgentJMartian]

https://soundcloud.com/lostmelodyagain/ ... emix-again
https://soundcloud.com/lostmelodyagain/dreamerv2

What could be missing in your opinion?

If you spent several months on these tracks, I would say to put them away, and to make others.
And re-listen to them once you have forgotten them for a new first impression.

^Simple yet good advice. Also, listen to other music. I have found that only listening to my own music while working on a track hinders me after a while. If you want more specific advice, maybe try focusing on the transitions between the sections of your songs that you already have, as opposed to adding more onto the songs. The way a song flows is just as important as how it sounds.

Also, take this with a grain of salt. I still consider myself a beginner

[brandystarbrite]

I have working on these two song for months now. ATM I keep feeling something is missing, any feedback and help will do



https://soundcloud.com/lostmelodyagain/ ... emix-again
https://soundcloud.com/lostmelodyagain/dreamerv2

hyperloop remix again - Okay. From 0 secs too 44 secs, there are places
where the vocals and the music, seem go out of sync, with each other.

Dreamerv2 - Wow! This one is in a genre of it's own.
The mood of the tune, changes alot in this.
Certain parts of the track, especially the fast parts, sound like europop.
I will admit, it's got style to it though.

The part from 5:06 to 5:35 secs, sounds really good. And it sounds like an entirely different tune.

[PashMotatoe]

This isnt related to the current topic, but im new here, and I have ABSOLUTELY NO CLUE how to install mda talkbox, if anyone could help me that would be great...

[D.Ipsum]

This isnt related to the current topic, but im new here, and I have ABSOLUTELY NO CLUE how to install mda talkbox, if anyone could help me that would be great...

It would be better if you opened a new topic in the Support section.

Regarding the mda talkbox, at home (Win7, LMMS 1.1.3), it can be loaded but there is no GUI, so it seems unusable.

[brandystarbrite]

This isnt related to the current topic, but im new here, and I have ABSOLUTELY NO CLUE how to install mda talkbox, if anyone could help me that would be great...

Welcome to the lmms forums PashMotatoe.
Just as D.Ipsum stated, it is best to post this question, in the Support section of the forum.