Ghost of Memories (WIP)

[vortexsupernova]

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Ghost of memories (WIP)
https://clyp.it/wub0jh3u
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It all started from randomly playing notes in my keyboard and recorded the midi of the intro (in 0:28) after the train sample. I do not think if it's good or nah, since I feel culture shock whenever I make songs with genres I don't really know to make. This is nothing serious I made under 3 hours. I am also frustrated making dubstep.

[D.Ipsum]

https://clyp.it/wub0jh3u

I think it's a good foundation.

[brandystarbrite]

It sounds good from 30 secs upward.
And the intro, was rather interesting though.

The tune itself, sounds less dubsteppish, and more like some other genre.

[vortexsupernova]

I think it's a good foundation.

Hehe thanks for the feedback. I had continued the song over here:
https://clyp.it/i0envadl
https://lmms.io/forum/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=27376

[vortexsupernova]

It sounds good from 30 secs upward.
And the intro, was rather interesting though.

The tune itself, sounds less dubsteppish, and more like some other genre.

Hmm yeah. I got some inspiration in Krys Talk - Fly Away (Mendum remix) and instead of Slow Rock fusing into Melodic Dubstep, I did Indie Rock.
I wanted to make a song about memories so I added that soundscape intro, and in the next update, I added more samples and made it better here:
<forum> https://lmms.io/forum/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=27376
<clyp> https://clyp.it/i0envadl