Need a Little Feedback, Because I Don't Know What to Add

[the black ryvius]

I just created this this morning, but I feel as if it's missing something. Feedback and criticism definitely needed: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NE4U_n ... p=drivesdk

[brandystarbrite]

Okay. After listening to it, I find it to be a good tune. A bit repetitive, but still, a good tune.

but I feel as if it's missing something."
Yeah. I agree with that.
Even I have no idea, what could be added to this tune. This one is a toughy.
If I get an idea, I'll post back here again.

[the black ryvius]

Okay. After listening to it, I find it to be a good tune. A bit repetitive, but still, a good tune.

but I feel as if it's missing something."
Yeah. I agree with that.
Even I have no idea, what could be added to this tune. This one is a toughy.
If I get an idea, I'll post back here again.

I did some subtle touch ups in the mean time. New and improved; https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Whz-o5 ... sp=sharing

A guy is supposed to rap over it, so that's why there's repetition.

[Khron0]

I did some subtle touch ups in the mean time. New and improved; https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Whz-o5 ... sp=sharing

A guy is supposed to rap over it, so that's why there's repetition.

Hey there ryvius! so these are the only thing I can tell:
- I didn't really like the bass, growly, buzzy bass around 0:13 onwards. Its a bit too loud in my opinion.
- You could add a bit of filler sounds in the background likes some more pads maybe a bit of white noise.
- Some minimal plucky arp towards the end.
- Maybe a kick just to get some more groove. Not the 4 beat pattern but a 1/8 beat.

Thats all that I would recommend for the track. Its simple yet has some vibe to it. The voice(don't know what to call it) at 0:30 is great addition to the song and I like it. The atmosphere at the beginning is neat as well.
Would love to here this with the vocals.

[the black ryvius]

I did some subtle touch ups in the mean time. New and improved; https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Whz-o5 ... sp=sharing

A guy is supposed to rap over it, so that's why there's repetition.

Hey there ryvius! so these are the only thing I can tell:
- I didn't really like the bass, growly, buzzy bass around 0:13 onwards. Its a bit too loud in my opinion.
- You could add a bit of filler sounds in the background likes some more pads maybe a bit of white noise.
- Some minimal plucky arp towards the end.
- Maybe a kick just to get some more groove. Not the 4 beat pattern but a 1/8 beat.

Thats all that I would recommend for the track. Its simple yet has some vibe to it. The voice(don't know what to call it) at 0:30 is great addition to the song and I like it. The atmosphere at the beginning is neat as well.
Would love to here this with the vocals.

- That bass is actually a piano that I just had playing some low notes. Duly noted, I'll turn it down.
- I'll try out what I can do with some pads.
-Plucky arp?
-1/8 beat? Like have a kick play for an eighth note each time?

[Khron0]

What I meant with the plucky arp are just some short notes with a plucky sound(like bells and a guitar or maybe synths) going up and down the piano. As for the kick, I made a mistake it was supposed to be 1/2 since 1/8 would be too fast. Sorry It was nighttime at my area when I wrote that.