Dub influenced track

[Dewke]

This is a re-work of an older song. It does have Dub influences, but not a proper Dub track. Getting the vocals to line up wasn't easy . The harmonies are taken from 4 different samples.
All feedback welcome
Listen to Trip To Mars by Dewke #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-330158/trip-to-mars

[brandystarbrite]

This sounds nice. And I can hear the slight dub influence in this.
Overall, I can hear alot of good potential in this tune.

Okay:
The bass is a bit drowned out by the other sounds. I think it should stand out a bit more.

And a bit of volume balancing here and there, will make this tune, sound a bit clearer
like your other cool tunes.

[Dewke]

Thanks Brandy . It could do will cleaning up a bit. Especially at the early parts