General advice for a song

[plainbanc]

Hi guys, first time poster here

So I started fiddling around with LMMS a few months ago and used it as kind of a sandbox/scratchpad. I had no previous experience in music making and I learned quite a bit from this forum.
I've never felt comfortable enough to post a song, but I thought for general tips you guys/gals could have. As an example, if my mixing is off, if you hear something weird etc.
I wanted to make the melodies myself, if you hear something wrong about them tonally etc. let me know

Maybe these kinds of posts aren't allowed, fell free to delete it if this is the case.

Maybe a few infos about this snippet of a song:
Piano: PATMAN with the 001_Acoustic_Brite_Piano tone.
Flute: PATMAN with the 075_Pan_Flute tone.
Drumsamples: musicradar-techno-drum-fx-samples, 513TubeDrumHits_Wav_SP

I hope this post does not seem like me begging for advice.

Song: https://soundcloud.com/plainbanc/just-f ... um/s-r0vKJ

Have a nice day everyone!

[D.Ipsum]

https://soundcloud.com/plainbanc/just-f ... mms-forum/

Welcome!

The link is dead ...

(don't hesitate to publish your tracks in the Music Projects section of the forum, we all started somewhere )

[plainbanc]

https://soundcloud.com/plainbanc/just-f ... mms-forum/

The link is dead ...

Whoops, I've updated the link

[musikbear]

Hi guys, first time poster here :)

Hi, Welcome to the Forum plainbanc !
Here are all important links:
http://lmms.io/forum/viewtopic.php?f=1&t=4740
-A few rules and useful forum instructions

Maybe these kinds of posts aren't allowed, fell free to delete it if this is the case.

They are fine, but belongs in 'Music Projects' :)

[D.Ipsum]

Song: https://soundcloud.com/plainbanc/just-f ... um/s-r0vKJ

Great track, from start to finish, but it lacks a development and an end ... I hope you will continue on it.

I feel that you already have some experience with music.

[brandystarbrite]

Song: https://soundcloud.com/plainbanc/just-f ... um/s-r0vKJ

Have a nice day everyone!

This music is really good. And I like the ambient house style of this.
I would say, that this track is 90% complete. All it needs, is a tad more, to make it sound
a bit more complete. Especially during the ending part.

Maybe a few infos about this snippet of a song:
Piano: PATMAN with the 001_Acoustic_Brite_Piano tone.
Flute: PATMAN with the 075_Pan_Flute tone.
Drumsamples: musicradar-techno-drum-fx-samples, 513TubeDrumHits_Wav_SP

Wow! You used PATMAN? That is cool!

[plainbanc]

Song: https://soundcloud.com/plainbanc/just-f ... um/s-r0vKJ

I feel that you already have some experience with music.

Actually not no But I'll take this as a compliment.
I always wanted to make music because I thought about melodies etc. a lot. So I decided to give LMMS a try because I was on Linux and did not want to pay a horrendous sum of money for a DAW. When I started a few months ago I didn't even know what Major/Minor were. Well, I still don't really know. I just really like playing around with sounds.

But thanks! The hardest part for me is keeping a song interesting. I can come up with a melody, drums etc., but actually making a whole song out of it is really hard...

[plainbanc]

Song: https://soundcloud.com/plainbanc/just-f ... um/s-r0vKJ

Have a nice day everyone!

This music is really good. And I like the ambient house style of this.
I would say, that this track is 90% complete. All it needs, is a tad more, to make it sound
a bit more complete. Especially during the ending part.

Maybe a few infos about this snippet of a song:
Piano: PATMAN with the 001_Acoustic_Brite_Piano tone.
Flute: PATMAN with the 075_Pan_Flute tone.
Drumsamples: musicradar-techno-drum-fx-samples, 513TubeDrumHits_Wav_SP

Wow! You used PATMAN? That is cool!

Thanks! I saw a lot of your posts when I visited this forum, so that's kinda cool to get a compliment from you
Yes, I struggle with the ending, but I left it unfinished just to post it here because I wanted to hear some opinions.

Is PATMAN not used a lot?

[D.Ipsum]

Song: https://soundcloud.com/plainbanc/just-f ... um/s-r0vKJ

I feel that you already have some experience with music.

Actually not no But I'll take this as a compliment.

Wow, so it's even better! (it was a compliment )

[brandystarbrite]

Song: https://soundcloud.com/plainbanc/just-f ... um/s-r0vKJ

Have a nice day everyone!

This music is really good. And I like the ambient house style of this.
I would say, that this track is 90% complete. All it needs, is a tad more, to make it sound
a bit more complete. Especially during the ending part.

Maybe a few infos about this snippet of a song:
Piano: PATMAN with the 001_Acoustic_Brite_Piano tone.
Flute: PATMAN with the 075_Pan_Flute tone.
Drumsamples: musicradar-techno-drum-fx-samples, 513TubeDrumHits_Wav_SP

Wow! You used PATMAN? That is cool!

Thanks! I saw a lot of your posts when I visited this forum, so that's kinda cool to get a compliment from you
Yes, I struggle with the ending, but I left it unfinished just to post it here because I wanted to hear some opinions.

Is PATMAN not used a lot?

Not everyone uses it. But it's a cool plugin though.