[Trap/Hip Hop] New Melodic/Hard Trap Beat

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hey,

I really got into making beats in the last like 15 days, so here goes another beat.
This one is sort of melodic, but has some hard hitting fast paced drums.
I also want to ask: what do you think about the 808s? The bassline seems a bit unorthodox to me. Any feedback or support on the whole beat would also be much appreciated.

Thank you in advance,

Porte/V.B.

Link: https://soundcloud.com/portebeats/treachery
Hey, I really liked how this sounded. It's got a good vibe and a great rhythm to it. To me, the 808's fit well with the rest of the elements going on in the song. I would recommend maybe lowering the volume on them slightly. It kind of covers up the melodic parts of the song. Other than that, this track is really well produced. Hope to hear more from you soon!
Good trap style music.
TurbulenceMusic gave some good advice above. Feel free to read it.