New beat, need your opinion! :)

[Departure Beats]

Hi everybody, I need your opinion on my last beat
What do you think I should add and how to make my projects better?


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0lkPR8cA6fk

[brandystarbrite]

Hi everybody, I need your opinion on my last beat
What do you think I should add and how to make my projects better?


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0lkPR8cA6fk

This is quite a nice beat.
I will admit, that synth melody, really adds a surreal, mellow type feel to the track.

I think adding in, a few more variations of the melody, would add some more, extra coolness
to the track. But overall, this tune is really nice.

[Departure Beats]

Hi everybody, I need your opinion on my last beat
What do you think I should add and how to make my projects better?


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0lkPR8cA6fk

This is quite a nice beat.
I will admit, that synth melody, really adds a surreal, mellow type feel to the track.

I think adding in, a few more variations of the melody, would add some more, extra coolness
to the track. But overall, this tune is really nice.

Thanks for replying!
I thought that I should put more drums and new bell sounds into my projects.
I will try to make old-school rap beats, just to see where it will go.