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Canilho » Wed Oct 31, 2018 1:43 am
I took a sneak peak at your profile.
You have some nice songs that shows a litle bit of your music perspective. I enjoyed to listen some of them, specially one mostly in piano.
About this one, in my opinion the song transmits a good mood, it's kind of dreamy and even inspirational.
About the melody itself, in general seems kind of flat, in a sense that doesn't change a lot of the feeling from start to end.
It has a small transiction like the ones at 0:47 and another at 1:15 but it's not very distinct from the main melody, which takes part of the beauty of it.
Don't be afraid to change things a litle bit more, or even introduce different melodies, instruments or effects.
Almost 1 month ago I've made a song that could be maybe in the same spectrum as yours called "Music Box", which is a good example to show exactly what I've said about changing the melody, without losing the main feeling.
Keep producing