Dancehall/Hip-Hop song

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I am fairly new to this, so any feedback would be appreciated.

Here's a song I made by adding vocals to one of my beats:

https://soundcloud.com/user-708092646/f ... erez-remix
Cepe wrote:
Fri Dec 07, 2018 10:59 am
I am fairly new to this, so any feedback would be appreciated.

Here's a song I made by adding vocals to one of my beats:

https://soundcloud.com/user-708092646/f ... erez-remix
Great mate. Was it your first try? If it was then its excellent if not then few things can be improved but anyways an awesome track. Keep up the good work.

Regards,
Shane.
Hi Shane!

Yes, this was my first project with LMMS, that i have been woorking on for a few months. I'm still trying to do better mastering of it, but I would say that I am very happy about the result.
Cepe wrote:
Fri Dec 07, 2018 10:59 am
I am fairly new to this, so any feedback would be appreciated.

Here's a song I made by adding vocals to one of my beats:

https://soundcloud.com/user-708092646/f ... erez-remix
Sounding good dude! :D
But all this needs now, is a bass melody. 8-)

Tip: The bass melody, can start to play, around 35 secs. 8-)
brandystarbrite wrote:
Mon Dec 10, 2018 4:34 am
Cepe wrote:
Fri Dec 07, 2018 10:59 am
I am fairly new to this, so any feedback would be appreciated.

Here's a song I made by adding vocals to one of my beats:

https://soundcloud.com/user-708092646/f ... erez-remix
Sounding good dude! :D
But all this needs now, is a bass melody. 8-)

Tip: The bass melody, can start to play, around 35 secs. 8-)
Hi Brandy Starbrite!

Thanks for the feedback!

I followed your advice and made a new version, this time with bass:
https://soundcloud.com/user-708092646/f ... ez-remix-1

Also, I started a new project where i tried to make a reggae song:
https://soundcloud.com/user-708092646/m ... erez-remix
Cepe wrote:
Thu Dec 13, 2018 9:31 pm
Hi Brandy Starbrite!

Thanks for the feedback!

I followed your advice and made a new version, this time with bass:
https://soundcloud.com/user-708092646/f ... ez-remix-1
Very, very good! It sounds much better now, with the bass melody.
That was the thing, that was missing from this track.
If you want, I think you could raise up, the volume of the bass a tiny bit more. Not up too
much though. Just by a good amount.


Cepe wrote:
Thu Dec 13, 2018 9:31 pm
Also, I started a new project where i tried to make a reggae song:
https://soundcloud.com/user-708092646/m ... erez-remix
This is a really nice reggae tune, you made here.
It sounds really cool. 8-)

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