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[Mrfatboe]

hi i made these songs and im under 13 k thx bye

http://www.mediafire.com/file/ncpeynk37 ... .mmpz/file
http://www.mediafire.com/file/chcsi9d1b ... .mmpz/file
https://soundcloud.com/mrfatboe-boe/freeon
https://soundcloud.com/mrfatboe-boe/syntax

[musikbear]

hi

Hi, Welcome to the Forum Mrfatboe !
Here are all important links:
http://lmms.io/forum/viewtopic.php?f=1&t=4740
-A few rules and useful forum instructions

made these songs and im under 13 k thx bye

Freon.
Be careful with the loudness.
LMMS has tools to aid you to not create artefacts due to loudness.
Most important are the meters in the FX-mixer:

You should not allow loudness for a component, to reach red-areas for more than msekd! If the meeter stays in the red area, you will get a bad mix, and other instruments are subdued
This happens after 0:14, and through-out
Read about Mixer:
https://lmms.io/wiki/index.php?title=FX_Mixer
Videos on mixing:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xuT_Ok6o5Dc

[brandystarbrite]

hi i made these songs and im under 13 k thx bye

Freeon - Not bad at all.
It has good musical creativity. But this one needs volume balancing etc.

syntax - This one has good musical composition.
The only problem with it, is that the instruments sound a bit dry. Try to find a way, to make those instruments and sounds, sound brighter and thicker etc.

Advice: Both tunes are nice.
But they both need, some good ol' volume balancing, mixing and some mastering.