A more chill song with future bass

[Aiminer357]

So this is a fairly slow song I made.

Aiminer357 - Take Flight

Youtube (Better quality)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u1CAQfGSM8M
Soundcloud
https://soundcloud.com/aiminer357/aimin ... ake-flight

I appreciate any feedback and criticism

[brandystarbrite]

So this is a fairly slow song I made.

Aiminer357 - Take Flight

Youtube (Better quality)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u1CAQfGSM8M
Soundcloud
https://soundcloud.com/aiminer357/aimin ... ake-flight

I appreciate any feedback and criticism

Wooah, this sounds cool!
It is definitely chill!

[fatraccoons]

I like the suspended chord resolution and the stabs in the chorus, I guess if i were to improve anything I don't really care for the melody coming out of the chorus. I like how that section functions structurally but it doesn't really do anything to push forward my personal interest in the song. Good song.

[Aiminer357]

I like how that section functions structurally but it doesn't really do anything to push forward my personal interest in the song.

Ooh that's a good point. I had some writer's block and was thinking if ways to make that section flow a bit better. I should have went with something more unique than reusing the same melody as before.

Thanks!