My first track, made with Lmms

[stnLouis]

Listen to Whoooo by stnLouis on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-121840315/whoooo

A bit scared to go public with this. It's of course not 100% flawless, but I like it myself .

Or I've heard it to many times making it and cannot evaluate anymore.

Help me out, I'm in this like with tunnel vision.

Grts, stign

[stnLouis]

I posted no link in my original post.
As if I even have to learn to use forums instead of just LMMS!!!

here it isssss:::::
https://soundcloud.com/user-121840315/whoooo

thanks for your understanding!
Peace!
sTnLouis

[brandystarbrite]

https://soundcloud.com/user-121840315/whoooo

For a first track made in lmms, this is not so bad at all. It obviously falls in the creative category.
Throw in a boomy sounding bass, probably add in a pad sound in the background, and it might sound extra better.