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My First Song
Posted: Sun Jul 14, 2019 4:13 pm
by obnoxify
Re: My First Song
Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2019 5:21 am
by brandystarbrite
Alright! Rad beat dude!
Tip: Okay. Try to find a way, to make the
vocals sound a bit clearer, in the tune.
Re: My First Song
Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2019 11:30 am
by Incorruptable
Its powerful,
Correct me if i am wrong, but i think this style of music and the lyrical content would be frowned on in your country, is that who the lyrics are aimed at? The current ruling elite in Pakistan?
Re: My First Song
Posted: Sat Jul 20, 2019 1:52 pm
by obnoxify
brandystarbrite wrote: ↑Wed Jul 17, 2019 5:21 am
Alright! Rad beat dude!
Tip: Okay. Try to find a way, to make the
vocals sound a bit clearer, in the tune.
Thank you
. What do you feel like I could do to improve them?
Re: My First Song
Posted: Sat Jul 20, 2019 6:14 pm
by Anonymouqs
The intro makes me feel so C H I L L
Re: My First Song
Posted: Sat Jul 20, 2019 7:17 pm
by DJB
It's chill, but the vocals in the chorus need to be brought out more, and you need more variation in the hi-hats. Other than that, it's pretty good!
Re: My First Song
Posted: Sun Jul 21, 2019 4:06 pm
by obnoxify
Incorruptable wrote: ↑Wed Jul 17, 2019 11:30 am
Its powerful,
Correct me if i am wrong, but i think this style of music and the lyrical content would be frowned on in your country, is that who the lyrics are aimed at? The current ruling elite in Pakistan?
Yep, on point. I'm the outcast lmao
Re: My First Song
Posted: Sun Jul 21, 2019 4:12 pm
by obnoxify
Anonymouqs wrote: ↑Sat Jul 20, 2019 6:14 pm
The intro makes me feel so
C H I L L
ayy.
Re: My First Song
Posted: Sun Jul 21, 2019 4:17 pm
by obnoxify
DJB wrote: ↑Sat Jul 20, 2019 7:17 pm
It's chill, but the vocals in the chorus need to be brought out more, and you need more variation in the hi-hats. Other than that, it's pretty good!
Ty. Will do that. Just getting into mixing so feedback is really appreciated
Re: My First Song
Posted: Tue Jul 23, 2019 4:25 am
by brandystarbrite
obnoxify wrote: ↑Sat Jul 20, 2019 1:52 pm
brandystarbrite wrote: ↑Wed Jul 17, 2019 5:21 am
Alright! Rad beat dude!
Tip: Okay. Try to find a way, to make the
vocals sound a bit clearer, in the tune.
Thank you
. What do you feel like I could do to improve them?
Try using one of lmms'
equalizer plugins on the vocals.
Play around with the dials, and turn the dials anyway you want, until the vocals sound nice, clearer, and punchy enough for your style.