New Remix - Pink Toes - Feedback!

[beagle]

Hey guys,

Been super busy recently but finally managed to pull all of the parts for this together. Made all in lmms of course, bar a couple of samples I took from the song etc, for which I used audacity (also free!)

https://soundcloud.com/beagle31/offset- ... strumental

let me know your thoughts! will try get a version with vocals out into the airwaves soon once I can get my hands on the acapella.

thanks!

[Incorruptable]

The tune and content of the track is perfect, but i think as you have pointed out, it needs something over it vocally as it kind of is very same all the way through.

Thats not a criticism, i just think it will work well when you something that breaks up the repetitiveness of the tune.

(Few more bars of your beagle barking maybe? )

[brandystarbrite]

Hey guys,

Been super busy recently but finally managed to pull all of the parts for this together. Made all in lmms of course, bar a couple of samples I took from the song etc, for which I used audacity (also free!)

https://soundcloud.com/beagle31/offset- ... strumental

let me know your thoughts! will try get a version with vocals out into the airwaves soon once I can get my hands on the acapella.

thanks!

This is pretty neat.
But the dog should bark a bit more in the track.

Tip: If you want, add some lmms' effects, to the dog bark.
Make the bark echo a few times. Then, make it sound reverby, the next time it plays.
Then afterwards, make it sound, like a combination of the two etc. Feel creative with it.

[beagle]

Hey guys,

Been super busy recently but finally managed to pull all of the parts for this together. Made all in lmms of course, bar a couple of samples I took from the song etc, for which I used audacity (also free!)

https://soundcloud.com/beagle31/offset- ... strumental

let me know your thoughts! will try get a version with vocals out into the airwaves soon once I can get my hands on the acapella.

thanks!

This is pretty neat.
But the dog should bark a bit more in the track.

Tip: If you want, add some lmms' effects, to the dog bark.
Make the bark echo a few times. Then, make it sound reverby, the next time it plays.
Then afterwards, make it sound, like a combination of the two etc. Feel creative with it.

Thanks man!!

Ah the desure is there honestly, but I'm only really using the bark now as a tagline type thing maybe ill make an actual bark beat one of these days and get reaaaaal weird with it