To be honest. This is an amazing tune dude.
Tips:
That
knocking glass sound heard at
23 secs, add a
reverb effect to it and tweak the dials. It'll make the
knocking glass sound, sound a bit more airy and help it blend in, a bit better in the tune. And if you want, add in an
echo effect to make it echo, if you want.
From
2:08 to
2:27 the volume drops low too suddenly.
Automate the volume, to make it slowly decrease in volume, then automate it to raise up the volume.
Right before,
3:12 secs, put a
semi loud rumbly crash sound, or a
bass drop, to introduce the rest of the tune from 3:12 onward.
Overall, this is a nice track dude.