The first track I made using LMMS

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Hello everyone!
I am a new member on this forum, and would like to share with you the very first track I made using LMMS on a Linux computer.
I am very satisfied with how it turned out, although there are a few more things that I don't really like - especially the kick.
Mixing could use some more work, but for now I am more than happy!
Here is the link, and I hope you'll like it!

https://soundcloud.com/user-721769899/s ... iginal-mix

[invain]

Very good man! I like the atmosphere, sounds...
The closed hihat is sounding somehow dry and sticking out, I would do some fx and lowering of the volume. Considering the simple chord progression (two chords dominating) during entire song, could be shorter slightly also. Try doing some chorus/prechorus, bridges etc. in the melodies and songwriting.
Maybe sounds like I am criticising, in fact is just subjective constructive comments I'm monitoring on my Edifier headphones which are no pro gear.
Keep up the good work.

[brandystarbrite]

Hello everyone!
I am a new member on this forum, and would like to share with you the very first track I made using LMMS on a Linux computer.
I am very satisfied with how it turned out, although there are a few more things that I don't really like - especially the kick.
Mixing could use some more work, but for now I am more than happy!
Here is the link, and I hope you'll like it!

https://soundcloud.com/user-721769899/s ... iginal-mix

This is a lovely 80's sounding track.