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Would love some Critiques for this Song

Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2020 5:25 am
by Eccentric
Hello!

I made song in lmms and I would like to know if there's anything that I can change or improve. Do I need to add a certain effect to an instruments, certain parts being load, etc... Feedback is appreciated.

https://thoseeccentricvibes.bandcamp.co ... rmony-lane

Re: Would love some Critiques for this Song

Posted: Sun Mar 08, 2020 1:01 am
by Eccentric
moviesapk wrote:
Sat Mar 07, 2020 2:23 pm
You have to the frequency and the instrument of the song.

Spam links
Instrument? sorry to ask but can you elaborate on it?

Re: Would love some Critiques for this Song

Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2020 5:56 am
by vortexsupernova
Eccentric wrote:
Sun Mar 08, 2020 1:01 am

Code: Select all

http://cinemahdapk.me/
http://vivatv.live/
Instrument? sorry to ask but can you elaborate on it?
IT'S SPAM, do not click on the links

Re: Would love some Critiques for this Song

Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2020 9:44 am
by zonkmachine
One spammer deleted in this thread.

Re: Would love some Critiques for this Song

Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2020 1:46 pm
by maskeo
try and use more notes in the base.

Re: Would love some Critiques for this Song

Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2020 4:23 pm
by vortexsupernova
zonkmachine wrote:
Tue Mar 10, 2020 9:44 am
One spammer deleted in this thread.


Not related to the topic, but I also made another discovery about the user that seemed to make another account (notice the "leonflix" and "cinema hd" that advertise the android app [apk]) and they put the spam links on signature:

Some put links on sig and make the font tiny, but from a user that advertises flash games:

(Forgive me Im on phone and I just uploaded the screenshots to my DeviantART sta.sh cloud
https://sta.sh/22q8fte0izp (4 pictures)
https://sta.sh/01sfnb5xqi3n (in signature)
https://sta.sh/02f2398t152x (same as the post you deleted, but uses an href instead of the actual text link url)

Re: Would love some Critiques for this Song

Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2020 3:50 am
by Eccentric
vortexsupernova wrote:
Tue Mar 10, 2020 5:56 am
IT'S SPAM, do not click on the links
I was confuse at first, but I think you're referring to the person who told me that I need frequency and instrument in my music as being spammer because his/her comment is gone, and all I did was quote his/her comment.

Re: Would love some Critiques for this Song

Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2020 3:58 am
by Eccentric
maskeo wrote:
Tue Mar 10, 2020 1:46 pm
try and use more notes in the base.
More notes in the base, I'll see what I can do with it, thank you.