This tune definitely sounds good.
One thing I can say, is that your music is starting to get better and better, with each track.
The piano part, that comes in at
1:35 and ends sat
2:07 seconds, sounds really good. I think that part should loop over again, because the piano's time in that part of the track, seems too short. The same advice I suggest, when the piano comes in later in the track.
Advice: I think the low pitch
horn sound, heard from
8 seconds, comes in a bit too soon. Let the intro play for about 4 bars, then bring in the horn sound.