Rate my first song

[MJB]

This is my first song, I do it like in 1 and a half hour I think.
Someone can give me any tip, or say his opinion, thanks.
https://youtu.be/lDRpyqH-Ofs

[brandystarbrite]

This is my first song, I do it like in 1 and a half hour I think.
Someone can give me any tip, or say his opinion, thanks.
https://youtu.be/lDRpyqH-Ofs

This tune would go well with a singer.
But overall, it's a nice pleasant sounding beat, and the melody is really cool.

[Honorius]

Beautiful melody, not enough words, You could write custom beats