EDM/Progresive House From LMMS

[Rolivhuwa]

Hey, guys, this is one of my latest:

I am seeking advice for this track it's still in the LMMS factory

https://soundcloud.com/rolivhuwa-rakhunwana/exams

[Rolivhuwa]

Much appreciation to TONITO RMX
free VSTs it has shown much improvement on my songs
https://soundcloud.com/t0nit0rmx

[brandystarbrite]

Hey, guys, this is one of my latest:

I am seeking advice for this track it's still in the LMMS factory

https://soundcloud.com/rolivhuwa-rakhunwana/exams

Nice work. That part from 1:23 secs sounds really good.

Advice: I think this tune needs a few more melodies, and possibly, a few more effects too.

[Rolivhuwa]

Hey, guys, this is one of my latest:

I am seeking advice for this track it's still in the LMMS factory

https://soundcloud.com/rolivhuwa-rakhunwana/exams

Nice work. That part from 1:23 secs sounds really good.

Advice: I think this tune needs a few more melodies, and possibly, a few more effects too.

Thanks Brandystarbrite

[dj-pixus]

It felt like teleportating between different genres, interesting concept. An "ordinary" producer would make 3-4 different songs from these elements, thus making more money
My toughts in realtime:
00:00 - Right at the start, a non-LMMS user could simply listen and enjoy. But WE know it's ImpossibleDream5, so not so interesting anymore. Don't use unmodified presets
00:19 - Suddenly we are in Egypt.
00:48 - Armin van Buuren shows up on the top of a pyramid.
This song perfectly emulates a dream. At the end i almost woke up
If we thing this way, we can even forgive the out-of-tune-ness of some parts.

[Rolivhuwa]

It felt like teleportating between different genres, interesting concept. An "ordinary" producer would make 3-4 different songs from these elements, thus making more money
My toughts in realtime:
00:00 - Right at the start, a non-LMMS user could simply listen and enjoy. But WE know it's ImpossibleDream5, so not so interesting anymore. Don't use unmodified presets
00:19 - Suddenly we are in Egypt.
00:48 - Armin van Buuren shows up on the top of a pyramid.
This song perfectly emulates a dream. At the end i almost woke up
If we thing this way, we can even forgive the out-of-tune-ness of some parts.

thanks that was funny though: but I noted your advice

[brandystarbrite]

Thanks Brandystarbrite

Yeah, no probs.

Sorry if I didn't listen to any of your newer music tracks.
My special speakers stopped working and I'm trying to fix them.
Hopefully they'll work soon.

[Rolivhuwa]

Yeah No stress Brandystarbrite, The factory has many songs you may visit anytime

[brandystarbrite]

Yeah No stress Brandystarbrite, The factory has many songs you may visit anytime

Thanks dude.