My First Song

[Pulse]

Hello! new user here... I have a song named "Song Of The Stars" I just thought sharing it to you all... I need more suggestions so that I can improve making music. I appreciate feedback. https://soundcloud.com/pulse-47/song-of-the-stars

[musikbear]

As i said on sC -nice, especially for your first attempt, but there are several things that can make it better.
Im almost certain that you have clipping. That occur when the sound either combined, or from individual parts, exceeds 0 dB. The result is distortion, aka clipping-noices.
Have you used a single channel for each instrument?
Study the fx-mixer here:
https://lmms.io/documentation/FX_Mixer

the meters should not go in red area.

But it a fine lead-in. Now you need to make a lead, and a catchy tune

[Pulse]

Thanks!!! I appreciate your suggestion... well I will study what I did so that I can polish it

[Gps]

Good start, but indeed a lot of distortion. ( recorded too loud)

edit spell error.

[Pulse]

Yes, I followed musikbear's instruction and it turned out to be great! Currrently uploading two versions, the Original and Extended version in Soundcloud. Thanks for the suggestion guys, you make me more inclined to LMMS!

[Pulse]

My Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/pulse-47