My First Six Tunes w/ LMMS

[Anthony Forwood]

Not being a musician, and only having discovered LMMS less than a month ago, I'm kind of proud of my musical creations. Please have a listen and tell me what you think....

Super Heroes to the Rescue!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=frUrDyUMUyE

Slow Bouncin'
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p5EL3a07hdE

Night Crawler
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=trV9_0VDINI

Hard Rain
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OG1BGsRmOSI

Guitar Fiend
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zqEyTsAs-Q0

Fifty/Fifty
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MBIZkUrStgI

[Anthony Forwood]

Does nobody read or respond to these posts?

No feedback????

[musikbear]

sorry, got under my radar
Your tracks are advanced, both in harmonics and style. I could definitely see your music in games where some special mood was being created. There they would work fine.
I like your arrangements, but you should work on reducing length imo.

As 'sit down and listen' tracks they are not for me.

[Gps]

I think you did well, but its not music I like.

[slipstick]

A bit too sparse and far too much treble for my taste. And mostly they don't seem to go anywhere, when you've heard the first 20-30 seconds you've heard all the ideas.

But still pretty impressive for someone who is not a musician and has only been playing with LMMS for a short while. But maybe you might listen fairly closely to music you really like and see if you can work out how you can make yours sound more like that.

Steve

[Anthony Forwood]

A bit too sparse and far too much treble for my taste. And mostly they don't seem to go anywhere, when you've heard the first 20-30 seconds you've heard all the ideas.

But still pretty impressive for someone who is not a musician and has only been playing with LMMS for a short while. But maybe you might listen fairly closely to music you really like and see if you can work out how you can make yours sound more like that.

Steve

Thank you all for your feedback! Much appreciated! I know that what I created has all the shortcomings that have been pointed out here, but I take the criticism to heart in a good way. LMMS is a lot of fun to play around with and makes a pretty good learning tool for musicians. I'll continue to work on my projects and hope that I can pick up some further useful critiques in the future.