Feedback help needed

[Gps]

Hi guys

Need feedback badly. I love / like some parts, but other parts hmm I don't know?

First wanted to call this topic what 's wrong?

If it helps I can share the lmms file, but I did use three vst....

https://soundcloud.com/user586365033/sadtrumpet

[brandystarbrite]

Nice.
Sounds a bit like a unique variation, of old school House music to me.
It sounds very Hippy skippy.
That trumpet is cool!
The trumpet can't be sad because, I like how the trumpet ends the music track.

[Gps]

LOL, and thank you.

It seems its not as bad as I thought. I am not entirely happy yet about some sounds I used.

Would like a more fatter bass sound for example.

[brandystarbrite]

I am not entirely happy yet about some sounds I used.

Really? I wonder which ones.

Would like a more fatter bass sound for example.

Interesting.
Perhaps, make a version with a "fatter bass," and we'll see where that goes.
I'll look out for it.

[musikbear]

The thrumpet Reminds me a lot of that sexy track with the girl-marching-band.. cant rem. its name.. ..galaporo.. buha.. something.. ..else
But your track
Maybe a tad long, and perhaps a real 'crescendo' with a sharp steep into silence, or something like that.. im not sure, though :p

[Gps]

Thank you
Sharp steep into silence sounds good.

Maybe I have to listen to some trance tracks with a crescendo, to find out whats wrong with mine.

I hope I am understanding this right though, but thinking about trance I think I do.
Or deep purple - child in time ( although that's not a steep one)

A tad long yes I think I agree, been looking at deleting one part ( out of 4) and having a better build up.


This one btw ?
http://www.boreme.com/posting.php?id=26561

[musikbear]

Or deep purple - child in time

o. m. g.
Y e s
It is s o goooood

.. i remembered the track now
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LgFJJ77w2nA

[Gps]

Deep purple, john Lord, musical wise one of my heroes.

And lol about that track, the trumpet does sound somewhat like mine.

DVS Saxaphone. free vst

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bpTqCU18vaA