New version of my track

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Hi guys, this is the new version of my first project with lmms. Hope you like it :D . Good fun. Feel free to make any comment. Thank you :)

https://youtu.be/zqD4X4bXU0E

https://soundcloud.com/vjncye-music/jeje-new-version
I am impressed, I think you did a good job.
Gps wrote:I am impressed, I think you did a good job.

Hi Gps. Thank you :) . If you want to give me some advice go ahead. Keep in mind that I am a rookie, I would like to improve. Also with regard to the instrumentation hardware( I have a notebook, Stereo headphones, 2.1 speakers from 30€ :/ ). If you wanna give me advice in general even in private, I'll be happy to listen to you. :D
Nice music.
Cool! 8-)
you may be a 'rookie', but you are picked in first round :p
Have you worked with FLs or other DAWs before?
Very nice track with good instruments and soundscape.

(what visualization program did you use?
musikbear wrote:you may be a 'rookie', but you are picked in first round :p
Have you worked with FLs or other DAWs before?
Very nice track with good instruments and soundscape.

(what visualization program did you use?
Hi thank you very much :) . only know lmms, I use a bit of months. I know almost nothing of electronic music. Before attempting to write these songs, I never composed anything. I was moved to write some pieces from a friend.
Excuse my ignorance, what is a 'visualization program'? I only used lmms. If you want to explain what I would be grateful. If you give me any advice I'd be happy. Thank you :)
brandystarbrite wrote:Nice music.
Cool! 8-)
Thanks a lot :) . If you want to give me any advice or criticism too bad I'm happy
what is a 'visualization program?
I think he wants to know, what software did you use, to make all of those fancy swirly psykadelic thingys, in your music video. :)
I must say, your video is pretty Rad dude!! 8-)
brandystarbrite wrote:
what is a 'visualization program?
I think he wants to know, what software did you use, to make all of those fancy swirly psykadelic thingys, in your music video. :)
I must say, your video is pretty Rad dude!! 8-)
Yes exactly what Brandy says - the video, -Eg the program using your music to visualize the music :)
musikbear wrote:
brandystarbrite wrote:
what is a 'visualization program?
I think he wants to know, what software did you use, to make all of those fancy swirly psykadelic thingys, in your music video. :)
I must say, your video is pretty Rad dude!! 8-)
Yes exactly what Brandy says - the video, -Eg the program using your music to visualize the music :)
Hi, thanks for your positive comments. I used a video editor online. I do not remember whether to google + or another. maybe I used what I recommend youtube. I uploaded the audio online, the rest did so automatically, I just chose the effect that I liked the most. I'm a rookie in this :/ .
small question: I noticed that my music does not sound like I would on the crates to mp3, in particular, if I raise the volume too high kick becomes like the sound of a stone falling into water.I do not know what I mean well, but what should I do??