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Hi SO I have been making songs for 9 months and i made a mash up of all my songs and i want to see how if i need more in the song or less and if the link does not work please tell me
https://soundcloud.com/drlemons/idea-ma ... ng/s-F1Dqm
some of these could be fine, but you have serious clipping! Your sound is way too loud! You need to mix with balance and suitable volume.
Perhaps look at these:
https://i.ytimg.com/vi/xuT_Ok6o5Dc/default.jpg
musikbear thanks for that i will try to make it less loud and try what you said to do. Thanks. :)